The Backstory into the World of Glypharia part 2

Out of all of the Caros fighting Vilicus, one stood out the most. Vir rose in reputation, attracting many Caros under his leadership.Vir became the hero of the Caros, a people that after centuries had become completely disparaged. They now had hope; a hope that would leap any bounds. Despite many initial losses, Vir kept battling as hard as he could. He never lost hope and the Caros that had not pledged their loyalty to Vilicus never lost faith in Vir's ability.

In a moment of insight, Vir developed a plan to steal Vilicus's research in an attempt to use it against him. The plan went unhitched, until Proditor, Vir's Lieutenant, betrayed Vir and alerted Vilicus of their plot. Vir was able to safely pull out most of his strike team, and managed one success: he stole the schematics for Vilicus' DNA manipulation device, called the Genestealer. With this, the Caros would have a chance to liberate themselves and fight back against Glyph, defeating the organization once and for all.

A majority of the Caros are now fighting under the leadership of Vir; fighting for their freedom. Who will win in this battle for Glypharia and its moons?

That's the first draft of the back story. I'll rewrite it and make it more of an interesting read when we put the website up. Names are subject to change, since I can't get a hold of NowBob right now to see if he likes the names.

Edit: Ekul is now Vilicus, latin for Villian. Sivart is now Vir, latin for Hero. Nosyt is now Proditor, latin for Betrayer. I thought Carnos meant meat/flesh, but I found out it implies cow/steer, so I changed it to Caros which implies flesh/meat.